[CIMC-work] Donation Thankyou Response. Critique if you want,

[Chris Kaihatsu]

on 5/3/03 9:41 PM, Garth Liebhaber at garthliebhaber@hotmail.com wrote:
> While this project is not about money, it still takes money.=A0 With minima=
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> funds, Chicago IMC is proud show it's self as a dynamic force in making o=
ur
> world a better place.


I like your copy and suggestions, Garth. To copyedit, how about:

"While this project is not about money, it still takes money to run
smoothly.=A0The Chicago Independent Media Center has accomplished much using
only minimal funding, and we are proud that the CIMC is a dynamic force in
making our world a better place."

> vollunteers

volunteers

> Your privacy is of utmost importance to us.

I suggest we kill this line. We have a disclaimer that eschews any
responsibility for donors' privacy through PayPal....

(And there's no need for double spaces between sentences.)


Chris




> Hey fellers,
> We just recieved a nice donation for fifty dollars, so I've written up
> a nice thank you response to send out to all future donations.  If there =
are
> no complaints, can we follow up on our plan.
> Elizabeth, Ian mentioned you had a Chicago@indymedia.org (or similar)
> mailbox.  Would you mind sending the thankyous out on that email?  I don'=
t
> mind doing it as well, but will need to set up such a box.
> Let me know, g
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> P.S. I still have the $50
> person's email.
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> Your contribution to Chicago Independent Media Center is greatly
> appreciated.=A0 Donations will go into our general fund which pays for the
> rent on our office as well as materials or tools that directly benefit th=
e
> Chicago IMC project.=A0 We are all vollunteers and take no "administration
> fees", nor do we maintain lists of donors for future solicitations.=A0 Your
> privacy is of utmost importance to us.
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> While this project is not about money, it still takes money.=A0 With minima=
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> funds, Chicago IMC is proud show it's self as a dynamic force in making o=
ur
> world a better place.
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> Gratitude,
> Chicago Independent Media Center
> 3411 West Diversey
> Chicago, IL 60647
> 773-384-8544
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