[CIMC-work] Donation Thankyou Response. Critique if you want,

[Garth Liebhaber]

Good suggestions Chris,
     I like your changes and added them.  fixed Volunteers.  The reason I 
double spaced between paragraphs is because it graphically gives a better 
sense of "fresh air" between thoughts. looking at a screen is harsher on the 
eyes and I think it's harder to pick up the subtlties of traditional 
indenting.
     Ian, you said you would forward this to Elizabeth, if she won't mind 
doing this.  Like I said, I can do it as well.

Your contribution to Chicago Independent Media Center is greatly
appreciated.  Donations will go into our general fund which pays for the
rent on our office as well as materials or tools that directly benefit the
Chicago IMC project.  Please note we are all volunteers and take no 
"administration
fees", nor do we maintain lists of donors for future solicitations. 

While this project is not about money, it still takes money to run
smoothly. The Chicago Independent Media Center has accomplished much using
only minimal funding, and we are proud that the CIMC is a dynamic force in
making our world a better place.

Gratitude,
Chicago Independent Media Center
3411 West Diversey
Chicago, IL 60647
773-384-8544











>From: Chris Kaihatsu <ckaihatsu@myrealbox.com>
>To: <imc-chicago-working@lists.indymedia.org>
>Subject: Re: [CIMC-work] Donation Thankyou Response.  Critique if you want,
>Date: Sun, 04 May 2003 02:20:24 -0500
>
>on 5/3/03 9:41 PM, Garth Liebhaber at garthliebhaber@hotmail.com wrote:
> > While this project is not about money, it still takes money.  With 
>minimal
> > funds, Chicago IMC is proud show it's self as a dynamic force in making 
>our
> > world a better place.
>
>
>I like your copy and suggestions, Garth. To copyedit, how about:
>
>"While this project is not about money, it still takes money to run
>smoothly. The Chicago Independent Media Center has accomplished much using
>only minimal funding, and we are proud that the CIMC is a dynamic force in
>making our world a better place."
>
> > vollunteers
>
>volunteers
>
> > Your privacy is of utmost importance to us.
>
>I suggest we kill this line. We have a disclaimer that eschews any
>responsibility for donors' privacy through PayPal....
>
>(And there's no need for double spaces between sentences.)
>
>
>Chris
>
>
>
>
> > Hey fellers,
> > We just recieved a nice donation for fifty dollars, so I've written up
> > a nice thank you response to send out to all future donations.  If there 
>are
> > no complaints, can we follow up on our plan.
> > Elizabeth, Ian mentioned you had a Chicago@indymedia.org (or similar)
> > mailbox.  Would you mind sending the thankyous out on that email?  I 
>don't
> > mind doing it as well, but will need to set up such a box.
> > Let me know, g
> >
> > P.S. I still have the $50
> > person's email.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > Your contribution to Chicago Independent Media Center is greatly
> > appreciated.  Donations will go into our general fund which pays for the
> > rent on our office as well as materials or tools that directly benefit 
>the
> > Chicago IMC project.  We are all vollunteers and take no "administration
> > fees", nor do we maintain lists of donors for future solicitations.  
>Your
> > privacy is of utmost importance to us.
> >
> > While this project is not about money, it still takes money.  With 
>minimal
> > funds, Chicago IMC is proud show it's self as a dynamic force in making 
>our
> > world a better place.
> >
> > Gratitude,
> > Chicago Independent Media Center
> > 3411 West Diversey
> > Chicago, IL 60647
> > 773-384-8544
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
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