[CIMC-work] issues pertaining to center panel

[Mitchell Szczepanczyk]

There's more to it than that.  The same guy called me and asked me to
reframe the headline and center panel entirely.  The language about
fighting had to be removed, but that's not all.  I rewrote the center 
panel from scratch and cleared my revision with him.  

I've gone ahead and done that.  Check the center panel now and you'll see
what I mean.

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On Sun, 27 Jun 2004, Thomas Yun wrote:

> Hey, all,
> 
> just got off the phone with someone pertaining to the three arrested
> today.  He raised some concerns about the language of my original newswire
> article due to the 1 p.m. hearing tomorrow for those arrested.
> 
> I'm even more concerned now about the language of the center panel which I
> think is misleading.  As an eyewitness to the events, I think the center
> panel should make it clear that the three arrested were not involved in
> the fight; instead the article reads like they were in the fight and that
> the police unfairly targeted the anarchist fighters.  I will make this
> change ASAP unless there are objections.
> 
> paz,
> t
> y
> 
> 
> -- 
> "The Day After Tomorrow" is rated Pg-13. Millions of people die, but
> nobody swears, copulates, undresses or takes drugs.
> 
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