[CIMC-work] issues pertaining to center panel

[Mitchell Szczepanczyk]

Thomas, 

Could you review the changes I made?  If you feel there are any additional
issues with the wording of the panel, let me know.

Thanks.
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_ Z  Mitchell Szczepanczyk
  /  http://home.uchicago.edu/~msszczep http://www.chicagomediaaction.org
     http://www.geocities.com/szczepanczyk http://chicago.indymedia.org

On Mon, 28 Jun 2004, Mitchell Szczepanczyk wrote:

> There's more to it than that.  The same guy called me and asked me to
> reframe the headline and center panel entirely.  The language about
> fighting had to be removed, but that's not all.  I rewrote the center 
> panel from scratch and cleared my revision with him.  
> 
> I've gone ahead and done that.  Check the center panel now and you'll see
> what I mean.
> 
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> _ Z  Mitchell Szczepanczyk
>   /  http://home.uchicago.edu/~msszczep http://www.chicagomediaaction.org
>      http://www.geocities.com/szczepanczyk http://chicago.indymedia.org
> 
> On Sun, 27 Jun 2004, Thomas Yun wrote:
> 
> > Hey, all,
> > 
> > just got off the phone with someone pertaining to the three arrested
> > today.  He raised some concerns about the language of my original newswire
> > article due to the 1 p.m. hearing tomorrow for those arrested.
> > 
> > I'm even more concerned now about the language of the center panel which I
> > think is misleading.  As an eyewitness to the events, I think the center
> > panel should make it clear that the three arrested were not involved in
> > the fight; instead the article reads like they were in the fight and that
> > the police unfairly targeted the anarchist fighters.  I will make this
> > change ASAP unless there are objections.
> > 
> > paz,
> > t
> > y
> > 
> > 
> > -- 
> > "The Day After Tomorrow" is rated Pg-13. Millions of people die, but
> > nobody swears, copulates, undresses or takes drugs.
> > 
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