[CIMC-work] issues pertaining to center panel

[Thomas Yun]

Mitchell,

all due deference to your initiative.  I'm going to make some changes.  I
was an eyewitness to both the march, the altercation and the arrest and I
have video of all of this so I have a pretty good sense of what happened. 
I'm not sure where you are getting your information from, but Pong and
myself were the only Indymedia people I saw on hand when the altercation
went down.

paz,
t
y

Mitchell Szczepanczyk said:
> Thomas,
>
> Could you review the changes I made?  If you feel there are any additional
> issues with the wording of the panel, let me know.
>
> Thanks.
> ----------
> _ Z  Mitchell Szczepanczyk
>   /  http://home.uchicago.edu/~msszczep http://www.chicagomediaaction.org
>      http://www.geocities.com/szczepanczyk http://chicago.indymedia.org
>
> On Mon, 28 Jun 2004, Mitchell Szczepanczyk wrote:
>
>> There's more to it than that.  The same guy called me and asked me to
>> reframe the headline and center panel entirely.  The language about
>> fighting had to be removed, but that's not all.  I rewrote the center
>> panel from scratch and cleared my revision with him.
>>
>> I've gone ahead and done that.  Check the center panel now and you'll
>> see
>> what I mean.
>>
>> ----------
>> _ Z  Mitchell Szczepanczyk
>>   /  http://home.uchicago.edu/~msszczep
>> http://www.chicagomediaaction.org
>>      http://www.geocities.com/szczepanczyk http://chicago.indymedia.org
>>
>> On Sun, 27 Jun 2004, Thomas Yun wrote:
>>
>> > Hey, all,
>> >
>> > just got off the phone with someone pertaining to the three arrested
>> > today.  He raised some concerns about the language of my original
>> newswire
>> > article due to the 1 p.m. hearing tomorrow for those arrested.
>> >
>> > I'm even more concerned now about the language of the center panel
>> which I
>> > think is misleading.  As an eyewitness to the events, I think the
>> center
>> > panel should make it clear that the three arrested were not involved
>> in
>> > the fight; instead the article reads like they were in the fight and
>> that
>> > the police unfairly targeted the anarchist fighters.  I will make this
>> > change ASAP unless there are objections.
>> >
>> > paz,
>> > t
>> > y
>> >
>> >
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"The Day After Tomorrow" is rated Pg-13. Millions of people die, but
nobody swears, copulates, undresses or takes drugs.